Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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You
Apr 28, 2003 23:07:48 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on Apr 28, 2003 23:07:48 GMT -5
I remember when we first meet
You walked through the doors
with one of my friends
You were just a shadow
to me you were unknown
to many people you were unknown
Now
Everyone knows you
and you are unbelievable
You introduced me to new beginnings
introduced me to me
from now on
it will be us
and you will not just be you
you will be forever
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
Posts: 90
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You
Apr 28, 2003 23:13:18 GMT -5
Post by caged on Apr 28, 2003 23:13:18 GMT -5
this is a really good poem tiny I liked it a lot keep posting
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You
Apr 29, 2003 19:41:50 GMT -5
Post by RiotGirl on Apr 29, 2003 19:41:50 GMT -5
oooh,
*rg looks at shiny poem*
very nice. I like all the stuff and about 'you' and 'me' and you know what I mean. Very phylosophical (sp?).
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You
Apr 29, 2003 23:40:13 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 29, 2003 23:40:13 GMT -5
i agree. a beautiful poem, tiny. it's still a mystery to me who it's about though.
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You
Apr 29, 2003 23:40:36 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 29, 2003 23:40:36 GMT -5
i agree. a beautiful poem, tiny. it's still a mystery to me who it's about though. is it about josh? fess up girly!
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Krystle
brand, spanking new
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You
May 5, 2003 20:21:58 GMT -5
Post by Krystle on May 5, 2003 20:21:58 GMT -5
Hay tiny i thought this poem was great and you should keep posting ;D
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You
May 5, 2003 21:48:40 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on May 5, 2003 21:48:40 GMT -5
lots of meaning in this poem keep up the great work. Maryann22
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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You
May 6, 2003 0:41:59 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 0:41:59 GMT -5
Thanks you guys i love replies this poem is actually about my friend Rissed when i first met her it was in my dream then it really happened Now we are the best of friends Tiny  |
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
Posts: 102
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You
May 6, 2003 3:57:09 GMT -5
Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 3:57:09 GMT -5
hey 'T' iny thats a wicked poem i love it its really good keep up the good work
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You
May 6, 2003 5:28:55 GMT -5
Post by rissed on May 6, 2003 5:28:55 GMT -5
thank you tiny. i shall give you a great big hug when i see you next.  |
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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You
May 6, 2003 20:27:03 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on May 6, 2003 20:27:03 GMT -5
thanks for the hug Rissed Tiny |
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