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Apr 28, 2003 21:57:36 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 28, 2003 21:57:36 GMT -5
maybe there was a message
in the way you turned away
maybe there was a sign
that i was meant to read
maybe there was no meaning in why i left you behind
but i had to choose him somehow
he needs me and i'll be there
till the end
i just pray that it's further away than it feels
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caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Apr 28, 2003 23:11:09 GMT -5
Post by caged on Apr 28, 2003 23:11:09 GMT -5
very nice rissed
I enjoyed it you have a good style
p.s. tiny is picking on my writing!!!
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Ignored
still rather new
Hi There!
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Apr 29, 2003 1:54:15 GMT -5
Post by Ignored on Apr 29, 2003 1:54:15 GMT -5
Hey Rissed, Nice Poem! ;D from?  |
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maybe
Apr 29, 2003 17:09:21 GMT -5
Post by RiotGirl on Apr 29, 2003 17:09:21 GMT -5
I enjoyed it as well. I especially liked the first 4 lines.
~rg
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maybe
Apr 29, 2003 23:25:42 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 29, 2003 23:25:42 GMT -5
thanks guys. but thankfully i'm going to try to get over this moping stage and write about more positive stuff.
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Jun 3, 2003 0:12:59 GMT -5
Post by 'the'*devil* on Jun 3, 2003 0:12:59 GMT -5
groovies chicki ;D
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Jun 3, 2003 2:00:02 GMT -5
Post by unburntflame on Jun 3, 2003 2:00:02 GMT -5
coolies. nicely done rissed.....though i still wanna know why you're in the 'moping' stage.....
ubfl
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Jun 3, 2003 18:15:02 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on Jun 3, 2003 18:15:02 GMT -5
i can relate right now u should be in the PO stage don't you think. it's getting out of hand anyway love this poem and can't wait til the positive stuff comes through Tiny  |
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