Cold Abyss

MysticMind17
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Cold Abyss Mar 9, 2003 21:51:00 GMT -5

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Post by MysticMind17 on Mar 9, 2003 21:51:00 GMT -5

Tides of loneliness
Cascade my soul
Engulfing my being
swallowing me whole.
The salty sea spray
corrodes my senses.
I am peraishing slowly
abandoning my defenses.
Bright sunlight above,
Deep Fathoms below-
This crushing pergatory
forbids love to show.
I am all to familiar
with the ocean of dismay.
I've drowned there before
and I drown there today.
This ocean endures
and my pain persists.
Only you can free me
from this cold abyss.

~Diana Brown

Alexia mod team Posts: 1,026	Cold Abyss Mar 9, 2003 22:01:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 22:01:26 GMT -5 OMG.....what a beautiful write. What more can I say but Bravo!!! I look forward to the next... Alexia
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engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	Cold Abyss Mar 10, 2003 5:15:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Mar 10, 2003 5:15:55 GMT -5 Fantasic! I love the connections between the sea and yourself
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Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 22:01:26 GMT -5

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