Stormy Love

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Stormy Love Mar 7, 2003 17:38:09 GMT -5

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Post by gMt on Mar 7, 2003 17:38:09 GMT -5

Why has our love recently
drifted
like clouds in a storm.

Silently a storm
in our hearts
became so violent.

Our love had always been like
silent sunny days.

Why has our love drifted like clouds
in a storm.

My heart begs for calm sunny days
to return to our hearts.

And never we part and drift as
clouds

Last Edit: Mar 8, 2003 0:10:53 GMT -5 by gMt

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	Stormy Love Mar 9, 2003 21:54:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:54:45 GMT -5 great poem

Alexia mod team Posts: 1,026	Stormy Love Mar 9, 2003 21:56:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 21:56:43 GMT -5 I like this....nice write. I enjoy reading your work . Alexia
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engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	Stormy Love Mar 10, 2003 5:20:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Mar 10, 2003 5:20:04 GMT -5 I like the comparisions you have, strong!
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Post by gMt on Mar 7, 2003 17:38:09 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 21:54:45 GMT -5

Post by Alexia on Mar 9, 2003 21:56:43 GMT -5

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