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Post by ladydarkblue on Feb 28, 2003 23:23:02 GMT -5
As I wake to light the night, my glow is hypnotizing. Each ray of my light aims straight for the heart. Releasing all anxieties and sadness, replacing a mellow mood of melancholy. Casting shadows of hard and sharp objects in the most delicate and small figures. Reflecting beauty across a pond like dancing fireflies of the night. All in the soft light is the symbol of two in love and a night of romance. So in the light of the moon we set the love to music and begin to dance.
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Post by rubbanekk on Mar 1, 2003 0:31:28 GMT -5
I did like this poem very much. It made me feel like you were reaching out to the reader. you set the mood very nicely. You are a very good writer.
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Post by ladydarkblue on Mar 2, 2003 20:46:51 GMT -5
:Dthank you so much for your kindness. I enjoy reading the poems as well as writing.
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 9, 2003 23:30:26 GMT -5
keep writing you do it so well
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