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Post by headspinner on May 6, 2003 2:30:32 GMT -5
Have you ever Met someone that one the one that kind of person who drives you insane but it feels all good
Have you ever Fallen in love with someone that one the one that kind of person you love forever with a love greater than you ever thought you could.
Have you ever Kissed someone that one the one that kind of kiss that makes you feel alive and left you dazed where you stood
have you ever lost someone that one the one that kind of empty space in your chest that can never be understood.
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Post by Jaysie on May 6, 2003 3:02:28 GMT -5
I never read the teen board, this just showed up in the ten most recent posts. This was a great write! Keep it up! Good job!
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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Post by gooba on May 6, 2003 3:54:23 GMT -5
hey headspinner i love ur work i can relate to the poem will look out for more of your stuff keep up the good work
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Post by headspinner on May 6, 2003 6:49:06 GMT -5
Thanks for the good replys guys
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Post by cassie5395 on May 6, 2003 21:26:53 GMT -5
i love this poem.. i can relate so much...keep on writing
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Post by Dancergirl88 on May 6, 2003 22:01:29 GMT -5
i love it!!! i can relate to it a lot keep writing!!
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Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:46:20 GMT -5
I've read this like six times. The last five lines really made the poem, or maybe I just respond to sad things lately. Great poem, I love it.
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Post by unburntflame on May 8, 2003 23:40:10 GMT -5
yes.
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on May 14, 2003 0:43:06 GMT -5
i know how you feel Tiny
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