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Suicide
Apr 21, 2003 22:01:19 GMT -5
Post by LittleLostGirl on Apr 21, 2003 22:01:19 GMT -5
Alone I sit
wondering why
why on Earth
I'm still alive
I have no life
no will to live
which also means
a f*ck I don't give
I sit alone
as the light outside
begins to fade
then finally dies
Dark thoughts begin
to consume my brain
I slit my wrists
hope the blood won't stain
Up and down my arms
I slide this blade
then the pain of the day
begins to fade
the blood starts to flow
and drips to the floor
when finally Death
walks through the door
He takes my hand
and leads me away
Now ashed and dust
I will forever stay [/color] |
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Suicide
Apr 23, 2003 18:41:16 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on Apr 23, 2003 18:41:16 GMT -5
wow. there's a lot of raw emotion in this. you can almost feel the words bleed in your mind. wonderful poem. painful and heartbreakingly beautiful at the same time.
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shortieluvsyou
newbie
love is love. teenagers are as capable of being in love as adults are, maybe even more so.
Posts: 15
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Suicide
Jun 8, 2003 22:56:25 GMT -5
Post by shortieluvsyou on Jun 8, 2003 22:56:25 GMT -5
i love it!! you are such a good writer i hope you dont feel that way its not a good feeling. keep up the great work though!!  TEXT |
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paxia
been around the block
Posts: 118
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Suicide
Jun 9, 2003 10:46:11 GMT -5
Post by paxia on Jun 9, 2003 10:46:11 GMT -5
:'(This one was very moving...Good job, lostgirl.
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kawazu
brand, spanking new
Posts: 6
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Suicide
Jun 11, 2003 11:47:12 GMT -5
Post by kawazu on Jun 11, 2003 11:47:12 GMT -5
that is by far the best suicide poem i hav ever herd.. most end up sounding corny.. this one was deep, painful... wow
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Suicide
Jun 11, 2003 17:00:35 GMT -5
Post by LilBlondieSour on Jun 11, 2003 17:00:35 GMT -5
OMG!That was amazing. The way you explained how you feel. I cant imagine what you are going through. IM me sometime I would love to talk toyou.
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
Posts: 100
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Suicide
Jun 11, 2003 18:15:53 GMT -5
Post by Tiny on Jun 11, 2003 18:15:53 GMT -5
this is sad i hope u find happiness soon need 2 talk send me a personal message Tiny  |
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Suicide
Jun 12, 2003 1:34:40 GMT -5
Post by LittleLostGirl on Jun 12, 2003 1:34:40 GMT -5
Thanks guys, I really appreciate your comments, I've been going through some really tough times lately, and writting is really the only way to express how I really feel, and I appreciate you all carin'! |
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guyfrommars765
still rather new
Life is somthin! And that "special one" makes life a bajillion times beter.
Posts: 39
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Suicide
Jun 12, 2003 19:34:57 GMT -5
Post by guyfrommars765 on Jun 12, 2003 19:34:57 GMT -5
Life is very terrible. But it is also very good. Hope you feel better (if u feel that way). Trust in God and every thing will be alright. I promise. I my self have had emotionally tough times and if not for God....... well God is good. The road God leads you on may be rocky but the destination is awsome.
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Suicide
Jun 13, 2003 1:58:26 GMT -5
Post by unburntflame on Jun 13, 2003 1:58:26 GMT -5
that's really sad. i hope things look up for you soon!!!!!
*hugz*!!
luv unburntflame
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