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Elisha
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S1ut Apr 21, 2003 18:24:05 GMT -5

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Post by Elisha on Apr 21, 2003 18:24:05 GMT -5

Her face is so depressing
There's something in her stare.
It gives a strange impression.
As if she wasn't there.
Silent, but still screaming out.
And no one feels her pain.
She's known so long that everyone
Will always be the same.
They never understood her
So she found another way.
She lost herself in all the men
That only want to play.
They didn't have to claim their love
Just run their stupid games.
She's not suprised that half of them
Don't even know her name.
She only tried to end the hurt
Not trying to be wild.
Now she's stuck here living with
Some nameless someone's child.

Last Edit: Apr 26, 2003 22:04:43 GMT -5 by Elisha

When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down
The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

LittleLostGirl still rather new !~Short But Sweet~! Posts: 42	S1ut Apr 21, 2003 20:38:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by LittleLostGirl on Apr 21, 2003 20:38:59 GMT -5 Hey, I've read a lot of your poems, and your a really good writer, you put a lot of emotion into them. Good job.
	!~Short but Sweet~!

rissed poet you say i'm a witch like it's a bad thing! Posts: 234	S1ut Apr 21, 2003 22:11:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rissed on Apr 21, 2003 22:11:05 GMT -5 i agree with littlelostgirl. elisha you should seriously consider publishing this stuff. your stylle is incredible.
	it's wise to look ahead, but foolish to see further than you can look.

Elisha poet Posts: 297	S1ut Apr 22, 2003 18:58:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Elisha on Apr 22, 2003 18:58:35 GMT -5 Thank you guys so much. ;D I "published" some on that poetry.com scam and I've entered a few contests but don't really know how to get actually published published by an actual publisher.
	Last Edit: Apr 22, 2003 19:00:26 GMT -5 by Elisha When the night is almost over, just before the moon goes down The wings of waking angels echo softly all around

heatherzafeather still rather new Posts: 45	S1ut Apr 25, 2003 14:03:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by heatherzafeather on Apr 25, 2003 14:03:01 GMT -5 wow, elisha.very good.

sanket still rather new Posts: 35	S1ut Apr 27, 2003 9:14:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sanket on Apr 27, 2003 9:14:00 GMT -5 hi elisha u r an excellent poet,the way u think is really diffrent from other ,keep up the good job. bye take care and keeping writing such good poems

RiotGirl shows promise shalom Posts: 86	S1ut Apr 27, 2003 14:56:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 14:56:57 GMT -5 I really like your poem . I love how it rhymes but it's not cheesy at all. I know that sounded weird, but you know what I mean. . . . Nice work! ~rg

Maryann22 poet/Gmod Posts: 721	S1ut May 6, 2003 23:21:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:21:44 GMT -5 great poem. Maryann22

Post by Elisha on Apr 21, 2003 18:24:05 GMT -5

Post by LittleLostGirl on Apr 21, 2003 20:38:59 GMT -5

Post by rissed on Apr 21, 2003 22:11:05 GMT -5

Post by Elisha on Apr 22, 2003 18:58:35 GMT -5

Post by heatherzafeather on Apr 25, 2003 14:03:01 GMT -5

Post by sanket on Apr 27, 2003 9:14:00 GMT -5

Post by RiotGirl on Apr 27, 2003 14:56:57 GMT -5

Post by Maryann22 on May 6, 2003 23:21:44 GMT -5