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engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	Bed Feb 15, 2003 8:00:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Feb 15, 2003 8:00:02 GMT -5 Interesting comparison sleep vs death. It does seem similiar. I love the flannel, symbolic for comfortable, perhaps?
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Pixie still rather new I am a twenty five year old, happily married woman who does NOT consider herself a poet, simply a lo Posts: 31	Bed Feb 15, 2003 11:27:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pixie on Feb 15, 2003 11:27:08 GMT -5 It seems bitterly humorous, a side of life that needs to be sliced. Very effective for a short piece, it is often so hard to say what you want all the time Bravo on an excellently penned poem!
	~And so it was that later As the miller told his tale That her face at first just ghostly Turned a whiter shade of pale~ "Whiter Shade of Pale" -Procol Harum-