The Rock

MysticMind17
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The Rock Feb 13, 2003 0:39:18 GMT -5

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Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 13, 2003 0:39:18 GMT -5

The rock was high
dangerous, I felt
pliable from the sky
Then I realized
I was strapped and
safe once again, on
a fake carnival ride.

~Diana Brown

This isn't one of my best or favorite poems, but I thought i should share it with everyone anyways. I hope you like it!

Last Edit: Feb 13, 2003 1:49:19 GMT -5 by MysticMind17

engarde poet/Gmod Posts: 428	The Rock Feb 13, 2003 9:23:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by engarde on Feb 13, 2003 9:23:42 GMT -5 Hi, It reminds me of my husband (of all things) I don't always remember how safe I really am! I like it...
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MysticMind17 shows promise Posts: 84	The Rock Feb 14, 2003 0:32:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by MysticMind17 on Feb 14, 2003 0:32:31 GMT -5 I am glad you like it. It seems to be the type of poem that when the more and more you read and study it, I like it more. Thanks

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