THREE DROPS OF BLOOD

[thepoetof1533]

THREE DROPS OF BLOOD
Three drops of blood upon the floor.
Three drops of blood ,no more noless.
Three drops of blood to make her fall.
Three drops of blood so very small
Three drops of blood in the downstairs hall.
Three drops of rich deep dark red blood,
in the downstairs hall.
Three drops of blood upon his lips did fall.
Three drops of blood his thirst did need.
Three drops of blood is all I need.
Three drops of blood,no less no more.

BY R.E.CASAS
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[engarde]

Thanks for posting!

I'm sorry, I don't understand your poem although I like how you repeat three drops of blood. It adds a surreal quality.

What is this about?

[thepoetof1533]

This is a story .well let me start over this poem became a short tory. A vampire is telling his story in this poem which is the first in a trillagy a vampier. Sorry for the bad spelling but I can not spell to save my life.TEXT

[engarde]

I thought vampire! I also thought it may be symbolic for the Holy Trinity (3 drops of blood: the Father, the Son and Holy Ghost) but I couldn't quite make the whole connection.
Can't wait to read the others, thanks!

[girlshapedgirl]

whenever i can
i have a few
poems
i write
specfically for
slamming
and this one
would rock
the world
to use
the phrase
three drops of blood
like a tribal chant!
rock on

[kawazu13]

i like poems that sound such a sing
i like this poems that hav blood and possiblly death in them.... this one wins