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Post by girlshapedgirl on Feb 12, 2003 0:22:12 GMT -5
nicole the bruce 2003 ***************** KEEP IT REAL
Keep it real much funny life is you are when you do you can see it when you hear them laugh tell it like it is no one can harm you if you say tell them what they know is true what can they do about it that’s why I stress it keep it real keep it coming true
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Post by engarde on Feb 12, 2003 5:11:37 GMT -5
I like the disjointed feel to this, especially the ending!
Thanks!
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Post by girlshapedgirl on Feb 12, 2003 11:57:30 GMT -5
funnily enough the majority of my poems are written this way you may see a pattern in the way i type my emails and my threads once i start i just can't stop!
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